Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Closed Trail by Alex Trudgen (A First Chapter)


Alex - 9th Grade

“I don’t know, Will …it…it just doesn’t seem like a good idea.”

“Mariah, I’m pretty sure it will be perfectly fine. Come on, Joe and your sister are way ahead of us now.”

Mariah took a few deep breaths and started walking towards the closed trail.

“I still don’t think this is a very smart idea and it’s not my fault if we get in trouble, okay?” Mariah stated in a firm voice.

Will looked at Mariah, nodded his head and walked faster.

Mariah and Kayla had been best friends with Joe and Will for as long as they could remember. When they were all together their daring sides came out.  They did everything together whether it was stupid or not, and for sure this was stupid.

“Good Morning, Dan. So tell me what we’re looking at right now.” Detective Jules asked as she handed Detective Dan an extremely large coffee.

“Oh, thank you very much. I really needed some caffeine!” Dan took a huge gulp of coffee and started to explain what had happened.

“Apparently four people came to this camping sight five days ago. All four of the campers were supposed to be at work today and the two days before. A couple of their bosses called them yesterday, but of course no answers. Today they called our station to see if we could make sure they’re fine, but I don’t think they are.”

“What are the names of the missing persons and what makes you think they’re not okay?” questioned Jules.

“Their names are Joe Danes, Will Peters, and two sisters, Mariah and Kayla Barns. A Mrs. Katers saw them start to hike a closed trail two days ago. This trail is not closed for construction, but it’s closed because three people died on this trail!” Dan answered.

Jules now remembered the case on those three missing persons. The trail was right by a cliff and they had fallen off.

Short Story  (Alex has written the first chapter in a longer book.)

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